You

I'm tired of fighting
tired of trying to forget
trying to prove to myself
that you and I would never fit

I'm lonely tonight
but it's not the first time
but I don't just want anyone
it's always you on my mind

I once had been told
not to give up on love like you and me
but I'm sick of waiting for answers,
done with hoping you will see

I want to know what you're thinking
if you feel the same way
if you still hold me dear...
still, to this day

because I know how for me
I get founder each time
and I wonder if you ever think about
the memories I have in mind

I could only wish that someday
a person will care this much too,
love me so much that without me... they suffer,
like I have been for you.

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[Eagle Cruagh]

Do you sometimes wonder, if when you
love someone with all your heart, is there
anyone in the world who loves back the same ?
Loneliness seems to be a bi-product of love.
Can that little bit of togetherness last forever ?

You seem to have covered the subject quite well.
You just make the reader think about the inequality
of love.

Very, very well written and it also seems to have
been thought out, expressed beautifully.

Great writing.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Emmie Girl]

A true poem from the heart! I like it alot, mostly because i can relate. "And I wonder if you ever think about the memories I have in mind." This is probably my favorite line. I often find myself also wondering if he remembers anything honestly worth remembering or if its just the stupid stuff. Great Write!

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