Tree of Life

creative poetry words and picture for 4/26-4/30 /2012

Ethereal visage of the holistic tree of life

Meditation and visualization

of waters branches

rivulets

Massage the terra

Medicinal in application

producing the harmonic 

convergance

peaceful causation

.....stirring existence

universally

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

This is just what I needed.a reminder of the tranquility of the universe underneath it all.

[*** Hey Jude***]

I found this read to be serene, bringing a distinct tranquility. I find it to show much of what I perceive holistic therapy to be. Being in harmony with spirit , body, and the universe that surrounds us.
Ah, the tree of Life! I love the way you have used this image. It gives great visuals, and makes the read feel "whole"! ~ :-)

[MOON]

The three of life of knowledge , this serene write speaks volumes.

[justjenn_2u]

You have an exceptional vocabulary and seem quite intellectual. This poem is not forced and the flow is immaculate. I enjoyed the ending and picturing how existence is stirred. Powerful. Write on.

[emmajoy]

Immensely calm and reflective, a sense of just being at one with space as the remedy for whatever ails the spirit. Beautiful, Lorry.

[Wolfhilde]

very sweet poem. well done

[?]

A very soothing...peacful poem...loved the last few lines
producing the harmonic
convergance
peaceful causation
.....stirring existence
universally

In my minds eye I read the tree of life as to be God, the waters to be our Spirit, the branches are the people branching...reaching out...UNIVERSALLY...

[Tai Ryens]

Soothing poem, you've knitted all the words here together quite nicely. Well done!

[Stammers]

I'm not one for 'minimal, word poetry', as I have dubbed it (rightly or wrongly) but I did think this was good, and I really loved the last three lines. What I hadn't noticed before with this style, which I cannot attempt myself, is that it can create a sense of space and quiet with the scarcity of words used, so at the last line, the verse just drops away; quite a nice effect.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.