Dirty

Do you remember...?

 

 without anger...

 

can you remember a love devoid of emotional pitfalls...

 

 would the feelings grow ...?

 

estranged from the soil ...

 

 dirty dirty soil....

 

can love grow and bloom ...

 

...without the dirty soil?

Reviews

[gombeggar]

nicely done

[gombeggar]

such a garden life can sometimes make...but you'd be surprised how much can grow in just about any soil

[Aidz]

Scribed with intent and hands encrusted with the soil

[Chris]

No I can't... It all seems like a riptide flowing at whim. Carrying the analogy further brought even more sense to it...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I am not sure, but one thing I am sure of is that this is a brilliant piece my friend. :)

[Dani R.]

This is really beautiful and so truthful. Really made me think. Great job!

[EMF]

Straightforward, simply put and as complex as it gets. Superb work.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

From personal experience: from the rot comes nutrients.
Great poem, Laury.

[Emily B]

you are right, of course, i have so much to learn

[...]

. no, it can't ... i have known love ... still know it ... it got tested only when it was subjected to rage ... blinding rage ... your words are infinitely poetic, profound, and perceptive ...