Poetic License or My Flaws

I begin talking and my mind kicks into gear...

no no not like that.. what i mean is.. or do I...

my mind and thoughts go scattered every where and end up being altered and changed just for the rhyming sake or the word position...

does it sound better that way ..

or is it just a form of ...

poetic license.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i think that many of us could easily relate to this one, those many grappling, at tiem pain stakng and hopefully - eventually gratifying processes, arh!!!

[Stabitha]

Oh, very very clever!

[Mockingbird]

i find myself with racing thoughts like these when i am having difficulty writing. your poem succinctly describes what it's like to be thinking too much about it. excellent stream of consciousness.

[MOON]

Ha, ha very clever. The beauty of poetry, you can disguise all your flaws.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Poetic license. I find beauty in language, it's an art form.
I love your little poem, it has merit and thoughtfulness and a few smiles.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

perhaps one should just let go and let it flow...........see what happens. Lovely!

[Ruth]

My dear friend :)
You always did invite with your titles and the poetry/prose never fails to deliver a smile or epiphany...wonderful xoxo

[Larry Dyson]

Thanx ,Yall...yep 3rd gear.

[?]

hmmm...Im just being quiet..thinking... and then bam...oh my goodness and it sometimes just goes straight to 3rd gear...lol

Awesome

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the idea of this and the last line says it all. We can create whatever poetry we want. We are the poets after all.