Haiku -To you

tongue in cheek psychology 101

Let Me Be the dried
Grape in the Skinner bran box
raisin hell eternal

 

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

wit bit this chick~ =D~

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think Freud would have a field day with this one.

[Raven Starhawk]

I never in my life have read a poem crafted as well as this. It has a hint of fun and yet a massive volume of potential.

[Amy Bumpas]

Quick, quirky, funny....

[Muse]

But raisons are much sweeter than grapes. That's not such a horrible thought...

[Liza]

raisin...raise in - raising hell :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

I'd trap myself in a Skinner box and keep pressing the lever for more poetry of the likes of this...delightful

[light and ashes]

Awesome, very different approach at a haiku.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Must be in the bottom of the box. Very clever!
Fun read.

[Ruth]

I LOVE this...Laury, you are epic! xoxo