Haiku -To you

tongue in cheek psychology 101

Let Me Be the dried
Grape in the Skinner bran box
raisin hell eternal

 

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

This was a refreshingly funny Haiku

[emmajoy]

I laugh with this one and won't forget it .. oh clever you, aware and touching same time.

[asdarkeyesclose]

well i'll raise hell with you, might be fun! liked the way you introduced a new idea in the last line of this. that is the way haiku should be written :)

Could be mean anything, that your mind was thinking of at the moment you wrote it, for me an important aspect of transience. Perhaps it is attributed to fear of death? because the word "Hell" in the ending is strongly committed in this Haiku.

[Audrey Howitt]

Ah, so cleverly done! Lovely write!

[Larry Dyson]

ty all..for the gracious reviews,, it was fun to hammer out..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

until one of us raisin lovers eats you up. :) Love it Eclipsing..........

[SkinlessFrank]

haven't you always been a rebel of sorts, clever man?

[Kerry O'Connor]

Could be raising hell 'internal'.
Very witty haiku.

[Hayley]

Aha, what a clever write! This must have taken a little time to think of and just pick out the right words, because you nailed it. Bravo!