Grounded

20 words for a contest //touch the earth

Shamanic powers abound …

Touch of earth clay about our feet…

Bound and grounded to earth’s magnetic core…

Astraly transformed souls.

Author's Note

astraly grounded alma /soul

Reviews

[Nobody.]

Magical and crackling with a life force all its own. Brilliant short.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Its so special to feel the connection and know that one is a part of something so powerful that it can not be measured. This poem gave me a feeling of peace.

[Desert Dreamer]

There is much to be gained by knowingly touching the earth.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the communion between the roots of us and the pulse at the center of the world turns golden in the expressive arena of beauty and power in brevity ~

[Derek S.Keck]

This piece is wicked cool! I love that sort of earthen interconnectedness this piece provides. It holds that element of mysticism that’s sort of ever present in life, like a return to the antiquities of earlier times. This is sort of something I've been trying to do with a lot of my work recently; I really want that spirit of the ancients to be present. That’s why I make a lot of allusions to Genesis and Sumerian mythology in my work. It adds a whole new life to modern poetry. Great write!

[Audrey Howitt]

There is a sense of other-worldliness to this piece that I love--and for me it speaks to the power of the soul---

[Kenneth The Poet]

Goes to show that maybe life, the universe and everything aren't fully material.

[brianna vega]

love this one but i want more

[emmajoy]

You know how to lead from both front and back when it comes to certain forms of writing .. what's more, it's done with subtlety and that always works for me. Clever you to make fine form as well as high sense within a controlled set of rules!

[Ruth]

The last line sums this up a treat! Blows me out of my seat...you have a talent for short form hon...always makes me smile to read you xx