Calabash Squash

entry for a contest...rhythm

Hip- hop jury swapped

Hippity- hoppity sequestered they stop

Bibity- bobity alone on the cobblestone.

falling in- falling over

The balcone railing and buckets pailing and hailing and

Scaling

The walls and ramparts the cannons were whaling

Moby dicking and schlicking the schlock of the clock… hickory dickery ..where is the Doc?

Blind mice made the move..up one �"grandfather  side.

... and

Over the top .

Now wasn’t that a quainty dish to set before the Queens …

in drag

Reviews

[Nobody.]

:) dig it. Makes the foot tap, and turns on the HD of the mind. Serious serial pictures of life in a singsong rhythm. A favorite mixed drink of mine.
Cheers!

[emmajoy]

I could live to this! What an incredible symphony of words; they eclipse even those of the so-called divas!

'Quainty' marvellous: 'Moby dicking and schlicking the schlock of the clock… hickory dickery .. where is the Doc? '

[Robin]

bippity bop rhyme an in rhythm ala carnival

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow, off the wall awesome.

[Sethnicity]

Fun devious ryhymes taken back from the hands of time...
I guess no suprise my Favorite line would be:
The balcone railing and buckets pailing and hailing and
Scaling
The walls and ramparts the cannons were whaling
Moby dicking and schlicking the schlock of the clock… hickory dickery ..where is the Doc?

[zig]

well you have some great rhythm and rhyme going on here, i have no idea what it's about, but then mayby i'm not supose to. i like your juxstaposition at the end, nicely done. all in all an enjoyable read.

zig

[Ruth]

And you worked it perfectly hon! I think this is the pinnacle of what was required! Awesome! xx

[Rene Velez]

nice dance in rhythm and rhyme, well done...

[.]

ha..brilliant..hippity hoppity's along..great rhythm

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this...