pensando

haiku written in spanish

Pensando aqui

y tu aspecto alla

en totalmente mi amor

 

 

literal translation is:

 

Me thinking here

your pressence there

all I am thinking about my love

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a presence in this poem that feeds the mind with detailed treasures.

[Mark]

Yo creo ques este escriba tiene que representar su corazon en su verdad completa. Muchissimas gracias por este, compadre.

[Emily B]

creo que es muy hermosa

[NightShade]

In my neighborhood, a block in any direction, will find this brought to English in slightly different ways. All will agree that this is a work of fine art!

[Larry Dyson]

another way to say in proper spanish- formal(todos que estoy pensando mi amor)among others...a friend asked about the translation and I am told and am finding that idioms are different depending on who and where and tone of writing..some words and thoughts are impled by the structure and meanings of the wrting.IMHO

[Dreamer]

I jus completed my 2yrs of advance spanish (A'levels) This is inspiring me to start writing in spanish again. This is such a romantic piece. Ps, i didnt realize thts how you say the last line...i learnt more than one thing from reading this piece today

[Marie Harrison]

Love it!
Very romantic

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Whew, glad you had this translated in English! I loved the whole feel of it, Beautiful

[N_a_t_i_a]

heartwarming...

[Chris]

Nice thoughts... and well done.

Chris