Her Masts
A Chapter by
Larry Dyson
haiku on Tall Sailing ships
Her masts, supporting…
billowy silken shrouds...
tall, majestic ship
© 2012 Larry Dyson
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Its one of the few visions that still holds a beautiful and nostalgic fel for me. To see them in real life is good day......oozes relaxation and adventure at the same time. Nice job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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I applaud you for being able to paint a complete picture of serenity in my head with so little words. Bravo!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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maybe there is a strong seductive woman on there? (something has to draw you to it)
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Wow, I love pieces about the sea and expected something more would greet me. In a few words, you said enough. If you have never been on sailing ship, you just were. Beautiful!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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It is wot it is and well scribed :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Delightful! Like a sweet to my mind
Posted 13 Years Ago
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You see, now I want to go to the beach! There's a few tall ships still around and they are definitely awe inspiring. Great write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Gives a good sensory feeling...
Nicely done
Chris
Posted 13 Years Ago
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A beautiful piece. I have a friend who loves the tall ones and would love this...
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Stunning!
So much description in minimal words...you have excelled hon...this makes my heart sigh!
xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
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