Surte America

playing around with sentence and phrase structure.

the town …

 

awakened…

 

to a humidity…

 

laced sun-rising...

 

unequivocally belying…

 

enchantment,

 

of the...

 

desert saquaro cactus landscape.

 

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Very nice I love how you described the scene.

[?]

Wonderful
I can see it now

[emmajoy]

we make what we might can, voicing our thoughts, alternating humidity with desert, haltering our visions .. your poem has set me off on a gallop across your laced sun-rising ..

'desert saquaro cactus landscape' is the name of a world-famous masterpiece hanging in our dreams ..