Extrensically Enticing

extrinsic, enticing, euphoric, delirious, velvet, sinful

She was euphoric...

 

The velvet touching her skin ...

 

Deliriously enticing...

 

Extrensically ..

 

Sinful

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The photo made the words come alive. I like the description. You said so much in so few words. Thank you for this amazing poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

WOW! The ending wraps this up so neatly! You caress words like gold! Stunning! xx

[quinfinn]

absolutely marvelous little piece, so many things imaged in so few words...and you know i love this style! brilliant!!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You created a woman of sensuilty! Excellent poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you describe the feel of her skin. Touch is such an important sense. We don't realize just how much we really use it and how it can turn us into heated lava.

[fireblossom]

Brightly lit. To the point. Space works well here.

[Joiedevivre]

extrensically... brilliant!

[Larry Dyson]

this is for the writing contest monthly called Creative Writing ...

[Sunni Davis]

I love the simple senuality of this poem. Wonderfully done, dear friend!