Panther-She

POEM

'IN THE MORNIN' SHE WALKS..ALONG THE RIVERS EDGE..

PRECIPICE WALKING...PROVACATIVELY... LIKE A CIRCUS TIGHTROPE WALKER..

FOG AN' SNOW SWIRLING ,FLUID..THEN STOPS .

ALL IS CRYSTAL QUIET...FALCON CIRCLES HIS WATCH AS HER GUARDIAN....

BELL RINGS THRICE..

KRYSTAL ,FEMININE...AS THE ICE CYCLE THAT HANGS FROM BRANCH..

CLEAR, SLIPPERY , SILENT,.FEROCIOUS.

LURKING IN THE QUIET ..WATCHING FROM PRIMEVIL FOREST..

PANTHER? ..

LEAD AND POWDER AT READY..FASHIONED FROM THE HUMAN FACTORY NOW FADED IN THE OVERGROWTH...FLASH OF MUZZLE WAVE OF ARMS ..LOUDLY

MARKING AND CLAIMING MY EARTH..PEE BLESSING MY LOVELY SPOT.. FEEL MY WARM PEE ENRICH HER.. MOTHER OF ALL ..TERRA..

RITUAL OF A WITCH ..SILENT AND CLEAR AND SLIPPERY..BELL RINGS OUT THRICE..

CALLING THE FALCON, HAWK AND THE EAGLE..WATCHING FROM THEIR TOWER AND BRANCH ..RECORDING HER EVERY DETAIL FOR MASTERS...

SPEAK TO ME OH FLASHING FALCON, ANCIENT HAWK ...OH BLESSED EAGLE..TELL YOUR STORIES OF MAJIK IN THE WOODLAND..

SWEET KISSES OF ACCEPTANCE AND FRIENDSHIP ..BLUSHINGLY ACCEPTED.. MARKING THE WORDS ENJOYED EVER SO..

SPEAK TO ME ENDEARING ONE OF THE NATURAL WAYS..WICCAN AND PAGAN..

DEARTO YOUR HEART AND SOUL.. RITUAL OF LUSTS..DRAW MY PICTURE AND FOCUS MY COLOR IN YOUR SPIRIT..

Reviews

[LamentedHaven]

This is a poem worthy of a remote standing. The sequences of what is happenings portray a depth that challenges the mind. Its one of those that can be interpreted by different readers on many different levels because the imagination can take it in so many unique ways.****

[Larry Dyson]

thanx LH

[writing mojo]

this is prayer to the goddess of belief, a flow on the wings of time which clasp every time you write between ether lines...flapping to a universe in the blink of a third eye you enthrall to center fertile words in a human nature...great piece

[Ruth]

This has a beautiful feel to it. I have of late had the grace of panther as my totem guide, changed to rattlesnake at the moment but the panther stayed a long time this year with me.
There is such raw power here, the dance of natural practice to the aura...upmost energy. A chance to return to primeval roots that some have forgotten. I actually find this piece meditative.
Brilliant work, hope you are keeping well my dear friend xox

[Ed Hart]

nicely done, a soaring pee is there ever was one

[Larry Dyson]

thanx Ed

[Ken Simm.]

Now I knew I was going to like this and I was not disappointed. A ritual feel is right for this especially strong piece.

[Larry Dyson]

ty ken..

[Chris]

I liked the feel and thoughts of this one...

[Larry Dyson]

ty Chris

[Larry Dyson]

I leave in the ritual as a natural grounding exercise by my witch...if you find i should remove it as it is distracting to the overall write..please discuss this? LAury
ps...thanx all!

[gombeggar]

interesting stylizing with your words here...very compelling

[Larry Dyson]

ty GB.