Black Rose

2 way colab with Kimberly Melody Gutierrez and Eclipsing Moon

The silver sifted coat of dew.

 

while cooling with sprinkles of morning light,

 

relieves the burning in my finger tips

 

Cooling my essense of desire..

 

to find and share the Rose ...

 

with black petals,and unthorned..

 

Breaking day does not thwart...

 

essense of this quest.

 

Ages old and eons sung,

 

Of a rose so fair, black,

 

 and..minus barbs ...

 

with which to ensnare,

 

hand and heart of lover true.

 

divine be the day I find

the rarest rose of all

for with its petals a spell

be cast upon my lovers heart

 

and all shall be as it should

enchanted love by petals black

 

 

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

I loved this, dear friend, didn't knew you wrote a collab with my soul sister, I couldn't expect less than this would be a masterpiece, my favorite part: "divine be the day I find the rarest rose of all" I don't know who wrote it but it could be both of you, as I know you :) this was splendid, as I loved your latest review! thanks a lot dear friend.

E.L.

[Larry Dyson]

yes your soul sister wrote a lot of it...she has the wings to fly you know..?making it just perfect in balance.Laury

She does really. She's amazing, not afraid to face things, a true honest soul, I admire and appreciate, just as you!

[kelvin]

this is very nicely written as if you were writing from the same pen you clocking out of work and the other clocking in as always keep writing fellow writer

[BlackRose]

Love this. Great collaboration. Flows so well. Has a sensual feeling to it.

Love takes it's course into the fire, Burns, raging, as it may that being that shall have my heart. The ONE keeping the flames ever aglow.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.

[Rene Velez]

nice collaboration, wordplay is melded together well, no change in pace or in thought, a union well suited.

[Larry Dyson]

thanx Rene! coming from a man who melds so well...

[David Scott]

Great love poem! Emotion and expression without the "sap". Well done.

[Pratik]

This is such a nice collaboration!! dark and mysterious it presents itself in so many shades... Coming to the shelter of nature that can heal one's deepest cuts and at the same time finding love in all its glory and colors... Your rich words make this truly an endearing piece.. Well done :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Truly an enchanted quest. This is a poem I like very much....very much indeed......as its magical. :)

[Larry Dyson]

John , you have mine and Melodies permission to use this colaboration ..LAury

[Sami Khalil]

divine the day I find
the rarest rose of all.
Nice write ... Thank you for sharing.

[Larry Dyson]

please do notice the many colaborations I choose to write with my fellow poets...5 or 6 this week alone...I cannot take credit for the all of it..

[Damien Davison]

I actually made my girlfriend a black rose using tattoo ink yesterday! I really liked this poem, nicely done sir.

[Larry Dyson]

please do notice the many colaborations I choose to write with my fellow poets...5 or 6 this week alone...I cannot take credit for the all of it..

[J. J. Nightingale]

I think this is more Kimberly than You Laury .. A little EMO feel to it .. Reads like something my grand daughter would write .. and she is a fine writer ... And I am old ..

Dark & Magical .. J.

[Larry Dyson]

a little paraphrase and some more shared lines..yes.