Butterflies

this was my first ever poem i wrote when i was 10

Have you ever wondered why

Butterflies flutter in the sky

I wonder how they knew

just  what they were supposed to do

 

Each one shows their magnificiant colors

and they show them proud

they are content with who they are

and feel no need to follow the croud

They fly about 

Without a doubt

just like a whisper 

Without a shout

 

One of god's great creations 

not one is just like the other 

Not even like their sister or brother 

 

Each one is unique

just like you and me

So if you think your not important do not cry

Just think of buterflies

Author's Note

sorry i wrote this when i was 10 not my best

Reviews

[Lauren Shearouse]

Thankyou so much yall ill be putting up my better stuff later.

[Viki Rachel]

This is so cute; I like the inconsistent rhyme scheme because it adds to the delicate sweetness of a children's poem. This is really good for a ten-year-old's work, Lauren!

[crazysox]

Great poem! I like how each paragraph had a different pattern. There's a few spelling errors, but that's to be expected when you're only 10. Keep up the creativity!

[Lauren Shearouse]

Thank you ya i know i need to fix a few spots in my writing ha but thanks so much.

[Latsyric]

Wow, it's hard to believe that you wrote this when you were only ten! There are a couple rough spots, but other than that it's a great poem. Keep on writing. ;)

~You know you love me,
-Latsyric.