Clinical

this poem represents a person with clinical depression

"Clinical"

cold, shivering, haunting; exposed

fragile, crumbling, a dying rose

the pain, raw and bleeding, hidden in sight

a sickness, a plague; a mind dark as night

white fury building, silent aching screams

from under the ice, not heard nor seen

bare, numb, a dizzying daze

beauty dances by in a glistening haze

oh agonized soul, beware your tortured thoughts

calling to the longing for the sinful fate you've sought 

Reviews

[Justin]

wow lauren that was really great, u had different elements in this poem, like mental and emotion, which made it extremely great :) great job :)