Sun Shine.

My lips burn your sweet honey skin

Well played lies turn truth deep within

While I wait for the sun

 

Pale with grief you’re a moon again

Full and bright show me how to win

While I wait for the one

 

Baby im alone in this rain

Clenching my teeth under the pain

Waiting for sunshine to come

 

Honey sweet kissed pale moon

I the bride loneliness my groom

Waiting a game I play for fun

 

Let the sun set your skin on fire

With a touch of my pale moon lips

Patience is not used under my pain

All the while I’ve been waiting

Come on and give me a kiss

Reviews

[Padma]

loved this piece..especially " pale with grief you are a moon again".
Also i liked "I the bride, lonliness my groom"...beautiful lines.

[Domo]

Okay, I'm impressed, at the same time you had a beautiful piece, as in an aw piece, and also managed for it to be dark. Congratulations, that is impressive. Good job, I loved it.
100/100

[bluessadmood]

what heavenly write ,how i liked the stream of thoughts and how well put
i was really moved again..there were some lines that did a wonderful effect..
Pale with grief you’re a moon again..
I the bride loneliness my groom
Waiting a game I play for fun
sweet in everything ,from beginning to end
lovely write..

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

I like this. A lot. I like all the metaphors. Great job!