Sun and Moon.

I was blinded by the sun

the one that warmed my lips

you brought a light in these eyes

and a moon to its eclipse.

 

without the sun i grow cold

without your touch I falter

without the light in my eyes i got old

without that love the moon was blind

 

the pain we walked through

was nothing when our lips met

the way you touched me

leaving you is my only regret

 

but i held on and I got strong

i couldnt lose to it and lit the fuse to it

been closing my eyes forever

and lose your love again, i will never.

lifes about seeing the sun

and letting it warm your face

I had you baby, to fight the cold

and you will forever have a place

 

Im in love with the sun

and I want you in my arms forever

you and I were ment for this

we could burn up the pain together.

 

but i held on and I got strong

i couldnt lose to it and lit the fuse to it

been closing my eyes forever

opening them I wont lose your love again, ever.

 

opened my eyes and find you
with tears streaming down my face
the touch of your hand on my heart
had never felt so much like grace

 

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

a very beautiful poem , wonderful imagery and the feelings were so strong and i enjoyed reading it....

[St.Jimmy]

Awesome rhyme scheme. I am glad!!!!!!

[Millionth Muse]

I was sad while reading this...not because it was at all bad, but because it really touched me. I love the way that you inffuse so much feeling into this piece. The second to last stanza was my favorite.

[Sheila Kline]

Full of feeling, and is a good story of survival.
There are some grammar issues....left out apostrophes here and there, but they can be fixed with a spell checker.
The poem itself has merit!

[alan khan]

really powerful. full of emotion. amazing work.