Fire Kiss.

I remember a day when your touch brought me fire, passion, pain, and greed for more. That day it seems.. will soon come again.

I swear you laced your lips
with something inhumanly strong
cause the burning inside
this longing for you felt almost wrong

the stinging burning heat
when we were touching like this
how the sun should have envied
you eternal fire kiss

when you were gone from me
I spent eternity alone
now air has returned to fire
and i make your eyes my home

with broken souls
we bled far too much
but we can mend now
with just one touch

in your eyes i find this place
one i wish to remain
your fire's kiss once treasured
now removes all our pain

this place where eyes do not see
what between burns now higher
gained my loyal heart my eternal lover
and i your kiss of fire

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot the imagery and detail in this were amazingly done... overall a very deep and beautiful piece..nice job!!

[shane]

seriously if you get published, i'll buy that book!!
love how it ends =]

[Sheila Kline]

Such a fire kiss should burn eternal! The last verse is especially touching. To return to the love of one who ignites such feeling and passion is sure to keep the sparks of love alive!!

[alan khan]

the last two stanza were pretty powerful. i like your work. it's always so interesting to read. i like how you keep me interested in your flow and with what your saying.