Amiti�

The obscure we see eventually. The completely obvious, it seems, takes longer. ~Edward R. Murrow

when the wind blows

i find her here

her eyes deep

and her mind unclear

but her hand always in reach

 

with the eyes like the sees

hair like bark on trees

she leans and whispers

to me "im here"

and her spirit always in reach

 

she turns the heads

but takes no heed

shes the ice to my fire

 she looks to see

and her love is always in reach

 

she wears pain like a shirt

but love like a perfume

an knows not of her worth

her walls a tomb

but her sanity is always in reach

 

with eyes of the seas

she always sees me

and with compassion

like the sun

she loves only one

and her heart is always in my reach...

 

 

Reviews

[Domo]

This is a marvelous piece.
~D♥m♥~

[alan khan]

really interesting. not normally into rhyming poems but it flowed well with this. nice work.

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

I love you baby, this is one of your best ones. Simply amazing.

[bluessadmood]

Oh God how love will let us see someone like no one will see
Eyes so deep ,mind unclear,always in reach
wears pain like a shirt,and love like a perfume
This was so nice ,your typical touch I could see in these lovely words
lovely write..