Stay forever.

If forever was only a touch

then please could i hold your hand

if the distance was all too much

 would you come closer if you can..

cause i cant fight this fate

and i cant fight the tears

i wish i could hold you

but your never here

so could i step off this ledge

would you find me here

would the thought of my death

bring you somewhere near

cause the thought of your absence

was all too much

i needed you like air

and it wasnt enough

my eternity would be empty

and you wouldnt stay

i rather be in hell

and stay forever this way

so if forever was only a touch

can i hold your hand

if your absence is too much

i'll die cause i can

Reviews

[Domo]

This is dark and mysterious, but at the same time it has a rather light and sad side as well.
Good job on this one, loved the rhyme scheme, loved the addressing, and loved the write.
~D♥m♥~

[Jackson Yang]

Such dark passion here. It speaks out to someone, come find me, give me what you have. Dont leave me alone or I will surely perish by destiny's hand. To want someone and to need someone so much that your life does not have meaning. Another great addition to your collection.

[bluessadmood]

How sweet ..I think in love everything is so relative..time and space just dont exist
everything change,distances collapse,and the ways look shorter to you
you feel so close no mater how far you are gone,you are always near
Can I touch those hands or fight this fate,cant fight the tears
wish I could hold you,never let go,but you r never near
If I die would you be somewhere near,this distance is all too much
need you like air..my eternity would be empty ,my life would be nothing
This was so sweet,how wonderful words about love could be,and your style is so perfect
lovely write