whisper.

I whisper...

i can feel your dead cold eyes

i feel your lungs collapse inside

do you see what you've become

can even fathom what you have done

and i whisper sweetly

"we were born to bleed"

fighting to breathe

our bodies built for distruction

our eyes not ment to see

to see the love i gave

and the love you destroyed

and how i paid

to be played like a toy

but its all in your nature

you are only man

you feed on instinct

you take what you can

and you whisper

cause you were born to bleed

struggling to breathe

blinded by the love

the truth going unseen

and i whisper

you will be brought to your knees

fighting to breathe

born to taste the violence

that you delt to me...

 

 

Reviews

[Domo]

So true, in too many ways I must say.
Truly expressive in a lovingly, hatred way. To me this is not all that describable, being it is such a delicate piece, I do not want to pierce its beauty with my words of insanity.
~D♥m♥~

[Fran Marie]

A great flowing dark piece~deeply expressed and well crafted~ Nice Job on this onE!

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

Born to bleed...f**k yeah.

[Sean M. Addams]

like the concept of this piece alot.... detail and flow are done well in this.... i like the deep and dark feel to this write alot... overall i think you did a wonderful job on this... nice work!!!

[Jackson Yang]

Another very intriguing poem. Such distaste, such hatred and passion. The art that people can make revenge become makes you wonder. The pain of being used and the will you gain to make him pay. Very good poem.