The Color Blood

i love your crimson on my skin

i love the way you bleed within

i love the way you scream and cry

i want the pain, you want to die

the blood is like a drug

the knife is like a lover

i love the flowing of blood

crimson was always my favorite color

you fight and pull but soon give in

you want me here you want my sin

you feell the thirst and the stench

the bittersweet honey, i will quench..

i love the way you twist and bend

you fight the pain but will not mend

i bring the knife and send a shiver

you touch the blade and begin to quiver

i love your crimson on my skin

i love the way you bleed within

i love the way you scream and cry

i want the pain, you want to die

i love the darkness in my heart

if you let me in we will not part

no dont deny i am your lover

crimson always was my favorite color

Reviews

[Silvario]

wow! this is amazing. i love the fast paced tempo and smooth flow of this piece. a very talented write indeed. i found myself getting excited as i read, the words and messege here is a powerful one and one cant help but to react. very very interesting to say the least.

truly well done! :)

[Domo]

This one is an extremely good poem. It's set so deep into my mind, and gives the reader chills.
Keep it up!
~D♥m♥~

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

this is really well written. the rhythm flows smoothly & it never feels forced. dark & vivid imagery, charming in a very disturbing way. great tale told. good write!

[barricade]

And the "blood fetish" so prominent! dark...and now I know what you meant when you said I had no idea as to how dark....and it shows!!! loved the darkness that flows throughout this piece...but the ending was a pure climax!

"i love the darkness in my heart
if you let me in we will not part
no dont deny i am your lover
crimson always was my favorite color"

with jus that hint of dark sarcasm and a devilish frown! (that's what I see here)

great work once again!!!