please..

you stop my breathing

why do you keep leaving

please just stay

just one more day

 one more second

so i can stop

my heart from breaking

your taking everything from me

and all i want is you

i just want you in return

for all the pain

for things to stay the same

please i need you in my veins

like a drug to ease my pain

baby just stay

just for one more day

just to prolong the pain

the pain that always stays the same

Reviews

[Rockebah]

I love this poem because of the continuous flow of emotions. Well done

[BLACKCRUSH]

Painfully beautiful , I liked this piece alot. You could feel the utter pain from the other person. Great write : )

[S.S.P.]

Genius might be the ability to say a profound thing in a simple way.
Charles Bukowski

[bluessadmood]

Oh this was so good,love was always a sweet bitter addiction,it really hurts,but we call for more..
You stop my breath,and you keep leaving..will you just stay,if for one more day
One more second to give me life,to stop my heart from breaking..
You took everything from me,but all I want is you,I want you in return
For all the pain,for things to stay the same..you took my mind
I feel you even in my veins,a drug to ease my pains
will you just stay,one more day to prolong my pain
the pain that I know will always stay the same
Oh what loveliness,this is really great..how I loved it..