Where You Are

Where You Are

A Poem by subtly.existing
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I just want to wake up where you are.

You told me, “what you feel is what you are”

But you aren’t nothing to me.

And I’m still struggling to find your name.

Because no one else is willing to keep up with someone so insane.

And I’m struggling to understand who you are.

In the best and worst ways.

And I’ll do anything you ever dreamed,

I just want you to be complete.

Little pieces of nothing that can’t help but fall

Just let it slide,

I won’t say anything.

  Just let me wake up where you are.

© 2017 subtly.existing


Author's Note

subtly.existing
Not really sure what to call this. Maybe a song remake, maybe a poem, maybe just a nonsense blurb. Send me any thoughts on anything, negative or positive : )

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It is always difficult to translate our thoughts into words. I am a bit confused by your first stanza as a whole. But you use imagery well regardless. The end is very cute and romantic. Keep at it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

subtly.existing

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your input! I totally agree just seemed irrelevant at a second glance

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subtly.existing
subtly.existing

Durham, NH



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Novice writer looking for a place to post my thoughts and express some feelings. more..

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