Perhaps it was a Mistake but I'm not sure I Care

Sometimes when it's raining
And the water is slapping the concrete
So hard I'm afraid it will crack
I remember the time you told me
You'd love me forever
And the time you took it all back

Reviews

[klayur]

This is powerful in its shortness. You did not let extraneous words dilute your impact. Also, I enjoy the title a lot.