Bravo, the meter and flow is spot on making it very easy to read, the subject matter is witty and has philosophical depth, masterfully written, I look forward to reading more of your work.
This was an interesting piece.
I was trying to make sense of it, figure out its meaning, but you have lost me hhaha.
You have my brain ticking :P
Even though I didn't fully understand the meaning, it seems like you put allot of thought into the piece.
Is it weird that I didn't fully understand it, but still enjoyed the read?
Anyway great write, hopefully your next poems not as confusing though.
Currently a student studying BA English and French. I love reading and writing and especially combining them with my other passion, which is music. more..