Dearest one

Dearest one

A Poem by Laura S.
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Just a short love poem for that special someone that brightens your everyday life.

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You came into my diary,

And promised me a lifetime without sorrows

Offered me what no one else had;

A smile, a future, hope, and most of all

Love.

© 2013 Laura S.


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That first line is one of the best that I've seen in a long time. Then your diary is filled with poetry.



Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love to read short one's only.......make more as same in the length.........i'd love to read more short one's.........anyway.......is it made by ya....indeed....???????????
I liked + loved = enjoyed it.......your words are dominant from uppers as well from lower....depth is there in yer words i can say......aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......dying to read yer more way's....if ya write in a same manner......beautiful write.....i felt the feel.......i felt the depth........depth + deep = deepness........

Posted 11 Years Ago


such a wonderful delicate read, enjoyed

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet! Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how this was a sweet delicate poem without the twisted turn of betrayal. It was very simple in a good way well done :)
-Courage

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kind of sad, so well expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, to the point and very sweet. It doesnt take a thousand words to express love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 15, 2012
Last Updated on June 12, 2013
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Laura S.
Laura S.

Puerto Rico



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