Fallen Blossoms

Fallen Blossoms

A Poem by Laura Hegfield
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Paying attention to the small stuff.

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The smallest of things seem to attract my eyes. Blossoms released from their stems, freed by the weight of heavy rain; their satin smooth petals against the rough surface of the driveway.





I notice them immediately as I step out of the car, so frail and tender, vulnerable, exposed. Perhaps it is an awareness of the brevity of their existence that awakens deep gratitude within me, causes me to stop, breathe, wonder at the beauty of this world; these tiny gifts strewn at our feet, easily missed by those who walk faster than I am able.




Images and Text Copyright © 2011 Laura Hegfield

© 2011 Laura Hegfield


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Eeh! What a beautiful flower, and a lovely compliment to an equally, if not moreso poem....it's funny, when you are struck by an illness of somesort or have visited so close to death's doorstep you find it within yourself to notice the smaller things, the slight, hidden pieces of vulnerability people seem to often overlook. A very nice piece, especially towards the end ♥

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Serene and filled with such sense of gratitude..I am touched.Very poignant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the world is a beautiful place, you just have to sneak a peek ocasionally to keep yourself in check, lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


i would say an exquisite poem...truly people dont take enough time to watch what they already have around them--what they should really appreciate!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful. People need to ease their pace, take a breath and look about themselves, observing the beauty so freely spread around them. Amazing poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem wonderfully written, with a top message, looking at the little things that can mean so much:)

Yas

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you everyone. This is my first day here at the Cafe, how lovely to receive positive feedback so quickly! I think I'm going to like it here!

Have a blessed Sunday everyone!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I find it hard to believe that some people just live their lives in black and white never lifting their heads , opening their eyes or smelling the sweetness around them ...good write Laura :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the light and beauty in this write..so perfect..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Laura, you see beauty in the small things that so many of us just pass right by and you are thankful. One of the reasons I admire you and your gentle spirit.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Laura Hegfield
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I'm a mother, wife, photographer, writer, blogger, lover of life dedicated to paying attention and gratitude. I also live with an uninvited guest, Multiple Sclerosis. It has slowed me down so that my .. more..

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