Juna

Mortified by my own laugh.

Scared to death of my own mouth.

Rain, please keep the air clean

I want to hide, from her, from him...

Wise words trembled from your breath

I came so close to live in my own death.

She said in her deep voice once,

"Even leaving, I won't leave for once." 

Fear in women enhances their beauty,

Enlarges their minds, and margins their duties.

But sadness in women, destroys their bright light,

Their notion of fairness, and eventually their lives.

I care to say, that I cared to know,

Too many people who were bullied by God.

Constant reminder to all us people,

That God is just in the minds of those who are sinful. 

I was heartbroken knowing the story of this beautiful soul.

She helped so many people, too many to know. 

All the all mighty gave her in return

Was a broken family and two kids under the stone.

If anybody knows, please tell me how does fairness work?

Is there a "fairness fairy", or can we choose a better God?

I know that no answer will ever come through.

I know that with their children, mothers die too.

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Reviews

[Trace]

Congratulations on your contest win.
Interesting poem.

Trace

[SWANN]

Thank you :)

[Kitty]

That is indeed quite powerful stuff. Has a flow to it somehow, yet the rhyming is irregular - making me pause in places and think a little.

[SWANN]

Provoked thoughts is always a bonus - thank you.

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Well done!
Congratulations on winning!

[SWANN]

Thank you :)