Have you ever been to visit a monastery or a spiritual retreat center and felt the incredible sense of peace that just permeated the air right down to your bones? These Godly places still exist....
yes they are!! worth far more than gold ;) i have been to a retreat ..and to a monastery ..both held unique and spiritual experiences for me ..but i have found "spots" out in nature that gave to me what your poem reflects ..when we find ourselves in such a "hot spot" one absolutely feels it ..there is a sense of responsibility one feels to protect it and savor that blessed peace that only comes from God ..your poem has bent my mind in a fine direction this morning ... so i would give you A + without hesitation :))
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Yeay! Thank you, E! Your review is very much treasured, my friend. I am so glad you stopped by!
I like this, its structure and style fits the subject well. You have officially been binge reviewed, my friend.:)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Ha! I am honored to be the object of your binge reading. It is always a pleasure to read your insigh.. read moreHa! I am honored to be the object of your binge reading. It is always a pleasure to read your insights and constructive comments. I've had to be away a long time, and I missed your reviews until now. Bless you, my friend!
yes they are!! worth far more than gold ;) i have been to a retreat ..and to a monastery ..both held unique and spiritual experiences for me ..but i have found "spots" out in nature that gave to me what your poem reflects ..when we find ourselves in such a "hot spot" one absolutely feels it ..there is a sense of responsibility one feels to protect it and savor that blessed peace that only comes from God ..your poem has bent my mind in a fine direction this morning ... so i would give you A + without hesitation :))
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Yeay! Thank you, E! Your review is very much treasured, my friend. I am so glad you stopped by!
I liked how you defines this place. Giving beauty and blessing to the place.
"They are worth
Their weight
In Gold"
I agree with the above lines. People who serve, not require profit. Are the Angels upon the earth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I am honored you like this one, Coyote. I agree with you. There is a special grace-filled aura aro.. read moreI am honored you like this one, Coyote. I agree with you. There is a special grace-filled aura around these special people who serve God for the pure joy of living this life for something higher than monetary gain. Thank you.
A magical feeling indeed of inner peace and serenity. It is amazing how we are touched deeply by people and places when we connect. An excellent write dear poet.....:).....
I myself, have never been to a monastery or a spiritual retreat center. I do understand they're a place where people can find retreat from the stresses of life. If people benefit from them, I'm sure they're worth it. I would leave the poem as is.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Relic. I appreciate seeing you here. Your opinion is always highly valued. Take care, m.. read moreThank you Relic. I appreciate seeing you here. Your opinion is always highly valued. Take care, my friend.
not sure i would mess with it...sometimes better what just comes out naturally...i like the feeling of this...regardless of the strife in the world...if we have a calm spirit, we are prepared for whatever happens...the restless souls are the ones who constantly fret about tomorrow, or if there will even be a tomorrow....
i read this and thought about Harrison's "What is life?" and "my sweet lord"---
good write, Anne.
j.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, Jacob. It is difficult to describe the feeling you get when you go to these places. It'.. read moreThank you, Jacob. It is difficult to describe the feeling you get when you go to these places. It's a very comforting pervading sense of calm...like all is right in the world. I deeply appreciate your words. Thank you for dropping in. :)
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