Thank You

Thank You

A Poem by Bright Ocean Star
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From my heart to yours....

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Many Thanks to you….


You, who take the time to read and review

By your very presence reading these lines,

You’ve distinguished yourself to me most fine

This site is built on reciprocation

I read your poems, and leave comments or approbations

 

So many a friend with poems just written

Request reads, but does not bother submitting

Comments of praise or encouragement to others;

They allow their silence to fill and to falter

 

So, out of an abundance of Appreciation

I have decided to recognize your participation.

For, I value your time and comments most honored

It lights up my day and sharpens my candor

 

This writing is honest and direct from my heart

It is not to be mistaken for satire, sarcasm, or tart

I truly do appreciate you

For all the times you’ve read and reviewed.

 

Please know that I have made an honest effort

To read through your writing, with comments left for

Praise and thanksgiving for writing with flair

Poetry, prose, or short story fair.

 

I have tried to comment and add my thoughts

To help you fix simple syntax and naught

I’ve tried to be helpful, respectful, and bright

To help guide your writing this salient night.

 

 

Thank you, dear friends.

 

Always,

Bright Ocean Star

March 31, 2015

 

 

© 2015 Bright Ocean Star


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how wonderful to read your gratitude .. i absolutely applaud you and reflect your sentiments myself .. this has been a wonderful place for me as well .. i am challenged and encouraged and gratified by all who take time to read and comment .. so God bless you Bright one .. i appreciate you!! ;)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Awwee, Mr. Einstein. I appreciate you, as well. I am always overjoyed to see you and the others le.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

happens to me all the time .. ;)



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Well said. I agree with everything you say here. Nothing worse than sharing thoughts without thoughts coming back. Perfect poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Thank you, KW, I appreciate you dropping in to read this one. It is true. After awhile of constant.. read more
An honest, open and sincere poetic expound and I duly concur with everything therein !



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Tom. I appreciate you taking the time to drop in and review this one. :)
aww this goes straight to the heart, Anne. so very considerate of you. thank YOU for being part of this wonderful family.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

You are welcome, Woody. I am ever so thankful for your presence here as well. So many days I need a.. read more
Woody

9 Years Ago

and I am flattered and overjoyed that my stories help bring a smile to you when you need it :)
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Oh wow, that's some thank you note, dear Bright Ocean Star. I remember I was just a newbie when I met you on this site. You and all the other writers on here have helped me so much. My writing has become so much better because of the constant support that I've received on here. Thank you for your support, dear ocean star. I will forever be indebted to you. Keep the gorgeous poems coming!! My favourite lines in here would be
"This writing is honest and direct from my heart
It is not to be mistaken for satire, sarcasm, or tart"
I would be glad if you've ever found my comments and reviews helpful. :))


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

Always, my friend. I always look forward to your comments. You have great insight and leave wonder.. read more

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