Soul and Inspiration

The Righteous Brothers got to me...

Souls walk

Speaking silently

Together

Entwined spirits

choosing

one another

Healing sins

Of the past

Forgiving days

Long transpired

One soul,

Closed and wounded

Clings to her

Seeking solace

Of her faith

Her soul

Soothes the

Wounded heart

Of a warrior

Finally home

Two souls

Become one

Two lost pieces

Affix together

One spirit

Cracked, yet

unbroken

Inspire magic

In each other

Trust builds

Over time

Distance

Desire reigns

With grenades

Of fire and heat

Cooling

Over time

Quenching with

Cascades

Of waterfalls

Age and fades

Yet, serenades

In the sunset

Of their lives

Souls walk

silently

Together

 

Bright Ocean Star; May, 2014

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Nicely done.


Love it thank you for your lovely
review and comment and sharing this wonderful piece.



Her soul

Soothes the

Wounded heart

Of a warrior

Finally home

Two souls

Become one

Two lost pieces

Affix together

One spirit

Cracked, yet

unbroken

Inspire magic

In each other

Trust builds

Over time

Distance



Blessings. kindred poet

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you, my spirited friend...:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet

[John Anderson]

Your words are so beautifully expressed and powerfully delivered. I really love this one

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you, yet again, John. You honor me with your kind words. I'm very happy you liked this one....:)

[Ranger Kessel]

nice write. good read. thanks for posting:)

[Bright Ocean Star]

You are welcome, I'm happy you liked it..:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I like the way your short lines of only a few words somehow give the essence of a soul; we know they are there but know so little about them. Very perceptive, very touching.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you for your beautiful review, great Aunt Astri....I'm happy you stopped by...:)

[Linda alexander]

Great write, excellent flow, fabulous footing on real life, souls broken joined to walk together, still walking in silence, with all their uniqueness in positives and negatives, wonderful poem, loved it

[Bright Ocean Star]

Linda, I'm honored you appreciated this one. Thank you so much for reading my pieces...:)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, my pleasure, take care

[wordman]

a beautiful poem and great music

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you, Ron. I'm very happy you stopped by for a read and a review. I'm also happy you liked it. :)

[wordman]

I always return favors and I enjoy your poetry

[Bright Ocean Star]

I do as well (return favors of reading and reviewing). I like to read through you library of work. You have a nice writing voice, and a good imagination :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This has an excellent rhythm to it. Wonderfully written. ^-^

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you, Brittany. I'm glad you could stop by for a read and leave a review. I loved your last one as well...:)

[Woody]

so many beautiful images, I will not list them. smooth writing and very touching.
a true poet as always.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thanks, woody! I'm very happy you stopped by to read my piece. :)

[Woody]

always a pleasure.

[Pax]

this describes how two souls found each others company, love in equality... love inspires many, it gives us life to our gloomy souls... great piece my friend...

[Bright Ocean Star]

Thank you, Pax. I'm glad you liked it....:)