This piece really touched my heart I speak to my
angel everyday and every night in prayer after I've
Praised the LORD and repented of anything I want to be
close not separate cause of a mistake a wrong I did I want to
Humble myself before him in a meek manner.
I loved these stanza's they were beautiful.
Pray thee well, my brethren be
Ask the Angels, “Please, Protect me”.
Angels are our Guardians, well.
Ask them kindly and they might dwell
Within the realm of our small lives
To guide and guard and watch and fly.
Thank you for this heartfelt and brave piece
bravo! and thank you for your kind review and
comments you left on my page. :)
Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Oh, Kindred Poetess, you make me smile! I'm so glad this one touched you so completely. It is my p.. read moreOh, Kindred Poetess, you make me smile! I'm so glad this one touched you so completely. It is my pleasure. I feel called to use God's gift to me to honor his greatness...and most people know nothing about this amazingly wonderous place. I cannot look at the clouds without honoring our angels. They are powerful beings, indeed. Be blessed, my friend, and thank you so much for your review. :)
10 Years Ago
I have a beautiful Cloud Photo I took and it is of a Angel :) I will post it if you'd like to see i.. read moreI have a beautiful Cloud Photo I took and it is of a Angel :) I will post it if you'd like to see it and you may save the photo if you'd like to if you'd like I will share :) I am glad I've put a smile on your face yes he loves when we spread things that Glorify him thank you for sharing. it was a pleasure I enjoyed reading. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet
Thank you for the amazing and hopeful poetry. I do believe Angels are watching us. A outstanding poem for hope and love.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote. I'm very happy you stopped by to read and leave a nice review. Sometimes, it se.. read moreThank you, Coyote. I'm very happy you stopped by to read and leave a nice review. Sometimes, it seems there is so much darkness, evil, and senseless violence in the world...it's nice to concentrate on the hope and love for awhile. :)
10 Years Ago
You are welcome. I enjoyed the beautiful and well written poem.
I browsed your "Author`s note" link & devoted some time there to read ...yeah like many experts, t.v channels, radio stations & newspapers ... so on .. that pic. really left scratching my heads as well ... I believe, neither they nor me .. no one can understand the depth of that pic. except, One, who took & designed that pic. with creations of arts ...
Let`s come to your poem now :-
Angels blow and direct the power
Eastward, westward, northward, south
Who knows where the next one will spout?
~~ These lines are what reflecting the mirror of your artistry in disguise of words ~~ I just adore this write ..and you know what? I`ve made a write called "Faith`s fallen" that`s came from this poem ... many words, verses and lines are plucked from this write ... I wanted to write something on it so, I did .. so, hope you`d love .. here`s a link of that write ...
All credit for this write goes to you. I`m now thankful to you that you shared your this write with others ~~ over the web ..i`m honored to read your beautiful write.
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10 Years Ago
wow...I'm honored that felt that inspired by my little write to write your own poetic art. Thank yo.. read morewow...I'm honored that felt that inspired by my little write to write your own poetic art. Thank you, Stephen. I will look up and read your poem as well. Thank you so much, and be blessed.
Do you know Bright, I think the first verse stands well on its own, ending in a rhyming couplet The second verse, I feel, is unnecessary. But I did enjoy reading it, thanks.
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