There Is A Wimp Inside Of Me

  Inside of me
  there is a person
  who secretly cares.


  Inside of me,
  there is a person
  who wants to run
  back to you.

  Inside of me,
  there is a love sick
  wimp
  who cries everyday
  hoping a girl
  will love him.

  Inside of me,
  is a person who
  really needs to shut up
  because his whining
  never helps.

Reviews

[Maya Storm]

Now this is more like it... Great job, you made me smile :)

[WordNerd]

AWESOME!!

[Rene Velez]

killer ending, made me laugh out loud, stick with the wimp he's a romantic girls love that, just look on the outside like you don't care and them hit them with the wimp, the world will be your oyster, lol..good write

[Protect Me Demons That ..]

Haha this was cute. I liked it :)
It was funny

[JCharo]

I like this alot. Very honest and flows very well. The speaker is having a conversation with himself and is trying to "get over it" whatever it may be. Your very creative title is what led me to this piece.. Good job.