There Is A Wimp Inside Of Me

  Inside of me
  there is a person
  who secretly cares.


  Inside of me,
  there is a person
  who wants to run
  back to you.

  Inside of me,
  there is a love sick
  wimp
  who cries everyday
  hoping a girl
  will love him.

  Inside of me,
  is a person who
  really needs to shut up
  because his whining
  never helps.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

Aww...
I like this poem...
No...
I love it.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Short.Nerd]

I like it :)

[StarSandwich]

Loved the emotion and how the poem flowed nicely. Like I said before I like your style of poetry. Its true though whining about thing never ever helps unless your five and you want ice cream :L but you know what I mean. If you want something bad you would suck it up and go out there to get it. You'll find someone. x3

[I Am Svetlana]

We always want to pretend we don't care, when deep down we want to say we do. Though we are arfaid of what others may think if we admit to caring to cover up our pretending.

[light and ashes]

I love this. This is a very great poem. Nice job.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very nice piece. I like the emotions as well. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done, very good expression of emotions here.

[Alicia Hirshey]

I think that this one is quite sad. I really like it though.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this...but it's sad. The ending made me smile though XD even though it never hurts to whine ^_^

[ImagineItAll]

I really like this!