Surely I Am A Dreamer.

A fresh new look, at a girl who is framed,

Clearly I am a dreamer. I gaze out at the window, wishing I was anywhere but here, the office of Mr. Gonzales, Principle of Thornsberry Academy.  I look at his cherry pine desk, the photographs of his children smiling at me. As if taunting me whispering "Your in trouble with my father." I grimace as the strong sent of aftershave finds it's way into my nostrils.

He is here. I force myself not to look at him, "Elena," his deep voice thunders. I say nothing, waiting for the punishment. "Young lady, I'm afraid this time you've really done it." he says sighing, as he sinks into his big office chair. "I didn't do anything! I didn't copy anything, it's truly my writing," I spat angrliy. I sat there fuming, no one at this school truly believed that I wrote that paper. Except Mrs. Clayton

.... To be continued ..

Author's Note

Please give honest feedback, no negative comments ect.
What can I improve? CLEARLY you see that this is a sloppy copy. Plan to make improvements.

thanks

Reviews

[MindCage]

The opening line "clearly i was meant to be a dreamer"

[Blessed_Author]

Well as the story expands the readers will find out why..

[Elfinlocks]

I noted your note saying that this is a sloppy copy. The only grammar error I saw was a "Your" instead of "You're" in the third sentence. I like where the writing is going, so good job.

[Blessed_Author]

Thankyou (:

[MindCage]

the main statement doesnt really mix with the body of the story. But as far as I've read it seems like a wounderful story

[Blessed_Author]

Please expand on what you mean.. My main statement? Thanks (: