Where have i gone?

You are unable to go farther,
on this long and lonely walk.
No other humans here
you trust enough to talk.

Every day your forced to lie,
and say that your okay.
Though your still searching
for a light to guide your way.

You throw youself at people
just for some attention.
Though the blank stares and silence
only add to your tension.

Author's Note

Im not the best speller. Tell me what its lacking or if the whole thing needs to be virtually crumpled up and thrown away.

Reviews

[Nautili]

i like it; the awkwardness of the ending is so real, the loneliness bleeding through the lines grabs the heart.

[William]

Thank you. ALOT. I wrote this after my girl moved... We have to survive off of letters till we finish school. I thought i would get alot of hate reviews.