Stand Again

Stand Again

A Poem by Shay Renee
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This is to inspire people to just hold on.

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Called, anointed and appointed is what they say I am
But when I’m here searching for a helping hand
In a dry and barren land
What am I to do because I can’t stand?
The bible says, Stand therefore
But what about those many doors
Closed in my face
No one there to embrace
Past hard to just erase
Do I still just celebrate?
 
Lack consuming my life
Not enough money to suffice
Don’t know which way is right
Or left
Still trying to do my best
But still encircled by this mess
Heard God was more than enough
But I can’t feel his touch
Said joy will come in the morning
But I’m tired of enduring
Cold nights, bitter moons
Oppression starting to consume
Every bit of my walk with thee
No one said it would be easy
 
But then the Holy Ghost stirs within me
Putting me to ease
Yes the Lord does see
Your tribulations and trials been surrounding you for awhile
But rise and stand my child
I have all power and dominion
Over Satan and his kingdom
And I know what you can bare
Because I’ve been standing right here
I’m putting you through this fire, but your coming out gold
Putting away the old
Your nights may seem cold
But I am the beginning and the end
I’m closer than you think, I’m your friend
I’m your Jehovah Jirah
I’ll fulfill all of your desires
I’ve bought you out of muck and mire, before
I’m opening new doors
Stand my child, don’t be afraid
Because I’ve given you power and you’re being made
Stand my child, stand again
Because this battle is not yours, it’s mines to win!

© 2009 Shay Renee


Author's Note

Shay Renee
if you dont have anything to say nice or that's going to help, then dont say anything at all!! Thanks a bunch!

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Wow this is really good! And biblical too! Awesome! The form reminded me somewhat of the Chanson de Roland, with the bunches of rhyming words.
"Money not enough to suffice" Might be reworded to "Not enough money to suffice."
"Because this battle is not yours, it's mines to win!" is the "S" in mines supposed to be there? or was it a typo?
"Of left" Or perhaps? of doesn't make very much sense...
"I'm putting you through this fire, but your coming out gold" IMHO this could be split into two lines.
Anyway really good. REALLY good. Awesome. REALLY awesome.
--Andrew

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Shay Renee
Shay Renee

Riverdale, GA



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I am a freshmen at Valdosta State in Georgia. I am a journalism major who loves to write and befriend new people. I having been writing since age 11 but had stopped. The poems I post are newer. H.. more..

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