Policing the wind

Policing the wind

A Poem by Lana
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Automatic writing session #1

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Love can write a million things but not pain. 
Love can be gentle and kind, it comes through you, you are kind. 
I love you.
It's important to gently lay your wrists where they may. 
I conduct you. 
Vain ist no one. 
I conduct lust and perform the highest love. 
I love you. 
Leave me when it comes through. 
Feel the energy of the conductor.
Peace be upon you. 
Feel the longing for more. 
Amen
Leave your pain. 
Be with me. 
Treasure your end. 
Be at peace with the treasure. 
No longer creasing the folder. 
Dare to be bolder. 
Be with me. 
Be in it. 
Dare to be different. 
Lay your head with thee. 

Dare to be different. 
Another day to police the wind. 
It sways but never leaves. 
Be entertaining. 
Live thee.
To love is to love, to be is to see
You have come to another tomorrow and you will see. 
Peace be upon thee. 
Winter comes, lean into thee. 
Come, another tomorrow. 
Come and never let go

© 2024 Lana


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Your second stanza is understandably addressed to the ways of the wind as being part of or likened to the wind.. and is lovely. However I must return to re-read your first stanza to understand far more of your thoughts, as with the following which is certainly finely put but -

'I conduct you.
Vain ist no one.
I conduct lust and perform the highest love.
I love you.
Leave me when it comes through.
Feel the energy of the conductor.
Peace be upon you.
Feel the longing for more.
Amen'

I truly want to understand.


Posted 9 Months Ago


Lana

9 Months Ago

thank you emma for your review. i wanted to create a sort of "chant" almost, from a sort of higher p.. read more
emmajoygreen

9 Months Ago

Thank you - I understand far more now and what you say of course, clarifies this and that, PLUS emph.. read more
Lana

9 Months Ago

yes totally! Im glad that it caught your attention,t hank you!

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Added on January 29, 2024
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Tags: life, death, society, beauty, inner thoughts, fear