Swimming

Swimming

A Poem by Lana

Life is the scariest thing ever invented
One day you are smiling
The other, your house is exploding
Life will destroy what you value the most
And then build a foundation and dust the stars
The remains of your ashes and pain that was punctured into your veins
There seems to be no reason behind it
One day you have everything
The next you have nothing
You and nature around youth
And the sun and moon rising
Disappearing
It is always just you in the end
Decaying into nothingness
Worms in a coffin
Eating away your instrument you've played against your will
You've never had anything in your life
But to play it out 
As long as you can
And maybe it is the universe's way
To let you know that
We belong to no one
And we will never own anything
We just are people, swimming
Crashing
Breaking
And reaching the shore

© 2022 Lana


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There is a lot of emotional truth to your piece that speaks to me. We truly are creatures of constant evolution. There are remnants of the boy I once was in my youth, and now as an old man I come to understand there will be remnants of him as well when I am gone. We are foundations built upon broken foundations. From sand, to dune, to mountain. Thank you Sarah for sharing your art with words to this community.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Lana

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words! I love it



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There is a lot of emotional truth to your piece that speaks to me. We truly are creatures of constant evolution. There are remnants of the boy I once was in my youth, and now as an old man I come to understand there will be remnants of him as well when I am gone. We are foundations built upon broken foundations. From sand, to dune, to mountain. Thank you Sarah for sharing your art with words to this community.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lana

2 Years Ago

thank you for your words! I love it

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Added on April 26, 2022
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Tags: love, life, fear, death, money, society