In This I Find

In This I Find

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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A poem

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Why am I, I mean
Don't you ever wonder
Because this daily, every day
Leaves me hollow
And I slip into oblivion
Could it be, I mean
We're just another blunder
And this melancholy
That's wrapped itself around me
Is just another breath to hold
What are we, I mean
Apart from the obvious
Because it's ache inside
Has left me empty
And I need to feel
Is it this air, I mean
That leads me here
A time machine moment
An emotions memory
This despondent peace

© 2017 LapseOfMind


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You asked a good question.
"What are we, I mean
Apart from the obvious "
I asked the above lines often in my life. Do I matter? Is one life meaningful? I believe all we can do is be kind, show concern and listen. Maybe this is our true purpose. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Feelings of loss
bring about this question
who am i
why am i here or anywhere
self discovery is both a painful and very rewarding journey
quite a poignant piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much
This is so gooood!! Maybe there were a bit too many "I mean." other than that; two thumbs up

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Well thank you very much, i really appreciate that! The "I mean"s were intentional in that they brok.. read more

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Added on March 24, 2017
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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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