Alternate Gravity

Alternate Gravity

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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Just another poem

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So desperate I find myself
Lonely as I sink below
Lost and entangled
Stuck in the grasp of your gravity
As you stand above
I find that my
Hands remain grasping
For what I know can never be
Your eyes, the sun
My moon is eclipsed
By the heavens above
I'm trapped by the draw of your energy
How can I slow
This pull that you bring
When I can't be transparent
Stuck in this focused reality
It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
And the light that you bring
That is the key to my cage

© 2017 LapseOfMind


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Cages and questions. Who knows the answer.
"It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
And the light that you bring
That is the key to my cage "
I liked the ending. We can be saved by a kind word and friendship. Many kinds of cages. I enjoyed this poem. You made me think this night. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


You never disappoint. Your poems keep getting better and better. Your words are concise and purposeful, and yet fluid and moving. Beautiful as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that
A very deep, meaningful poem :) Loved reading it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

I appreciate that, thank you :)
love your poem

It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
those lines are just simply amazing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Well thank you very much, I appreciate that

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Added on March 4, 2017
Last Updated on March 4, 2017
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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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