Grace In Mind

So I found this in a journal and it's dated Valentines Day of last year. I have no clue if I've uploaded this yet or not. It had no title when I found it. Hopefully I haven't uploaded it yet.

This angel's kiss
A demon's bane
It's soft skin touch
A forgotten flame
My cruel gaze
And sinful game
All cured with tincture
From heaven's rain
Those outstretched fingers
That grasp at mine
Bear charming pictures
With hate in mind
But empty gallows
Grow old with wait
For an angel's kiss
Stole my fate

Author's Note

It's just a poem.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting flow of thoughts led to sad ending. The statements in the poem. Strong and worthwhile. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bacchus]

the flow
and juxtaposition
of the angel and the curse
are well played... this could be a song

[LapseOfMind]

Well thank you very much

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A briskly flowing poem; nicely worded.

A nice contrast of this angelic kiss bringing about bad luck and a downtrodden fate.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much

[Anthony Wayne]

I really liked the ending of this, especially the last 4 lines. Well done! Keep writing

[LapseOfMind]

Awesome, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[Tiffany K Charles]

oooohhhhhh. pain love lost and anger.... nice collision of emotions and nice analogies... You painted a very well painted picture... Good job love... Well done!!

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much, I honestly can't remember what happened to cause me to write this. Oh well :)

[Jade]

I enjoyed your words, I love the last four lines.

[LapseOfMind]

Awesome, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading it