Redemption

Redemption

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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I read a book. It inspired this as I reflected over it.

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As if it might rain, I gave you my sin
Your alphabet blade, filet open my skin
This contrary constant, constructing within
Salvation of soul, redeeming love - it begin
Mere child am I, fortuitous one
Cycles of cyphers, another lost son
Too much for coincidence, I see its begun
Like the moon in the twilight, your will it be done

© 2016 LapseOfMind


Author's Note

LapseOfMind
I notice that a lot of my poems rhyme and are short. Here's another one.

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I enjoyed reading your poem. Well written. Its a poem that makes you sit back and think. keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really like how your poems slide off the tongue very easily. They're beautifully written, and have deep meanings.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate it
You asked me to review your writing so here is my review I didn't understand it, and that's ok it's your poem, so it's yi is own style not eveykne can understand


Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Lol well thank you
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As it is written "I am that I am", you are that you are...
I like this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you much :)
This is really amazing, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Amazing use of words my friend..
"As if it might rain, I gave you my sin
Your alphabet blade, filet open my skin "
The opening lines. Honest, direct and feel of real life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I always enjoy your work and you are welcome.
LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you good sir

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Added on September 17, 2016
Last Updated on September 17, 2016
Tags: Poem, poetry, God, love, redemption

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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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