Tied Into Me

Words reflecting a feeling, brought about by a moment, an urgency of thought.

And as we stand
On the edge of it all
I see in your eyes
There's no going back
Outside from the inside
This moment of touch
All focus that's given
Is lacking in sin
Our skin that is melding
False sense of what's real
Fingernails that scrape
Fall black to give in

Reviews

[fierceauthor]

OKay very intense and visual

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you much

[jesserose99]

outside from the inside...I can't believe how much like a thought I had that is....but you have it so well expressed...as is your gift. To express with out coming right out and saying it. remaining a touch abstract. I absolutely love that ability. beautiful!

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much :) this one just flowed out, as if I wasn't even writing it. Took me probably less than 5 minutes to write

[Lost in Wonderland]

I felt the urgency in this. Very well written-- brevity is the soul of wit. :)

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you so very much! I really appreciate that

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem at all!

[Ashley Renegade]

Amazing as per your usual! Definitely evokes that sense you get when you cross the point of no return for better or for worse, at least that is what I perceived while reading it.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much! You perceived right what I was getting at. I appreciate you taking your time to read and review my work!!

[Ashley Renegade]

The pleasure is all mine!