Your December eyes
Cold as the lonely moon
Stare right through me
A shadow in the dark
No choice but to
Disappear
I watch
Close enough to touch
As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point
Amazing use of words. Gave the December cold place and vision.
"As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point"
I did like the above lines. Honest and to the point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, I really appreciate it! It felt good to write it out instead of holding it inside
I like your poem. Brings to mind, a cold and empty soul. Emotionless with nothing inside. Cannot be consoled, so what's the use of trying anymore. Good job. Keep writing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, I'm happy you liked it. "What's the use of trying anymore" is exactly how I felt when i w.. read moreThank you, I'm happy you liked it. "What's the use of trying anymore" is exactly how I felt when i wrote this