December Eyes

December Eyes

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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Just a poem

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Your December eyes
Cold as the lonely moon
Stare right through me
A shadow in the dark
No choice but to
Disappear
I watch
Close enough to touch
As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point

© 2015 LapseOfMind


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Amazing use of words. Gave the December cold place and vision.
"As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point"
I did like the above lines. Honest and to the point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate it! It felt good to write it out instead of holding it inside
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I agree and you are welcome.
I like your poem. Brings to mind, a cold and empty soul. Emotionless with nothing inside. Cannot be consoled, so what's the use of trying anymore. Good job. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it. "What's the use of trying anymore" is exactly how I felt when i w.. read more

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Added on November 5, 2015
Last Updated on November 5, 2015
Tags: Poem, poetry, December, cold

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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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