As Planned

Venting what I must

In no uncertain terms
You prepare our
Disconnect
Like the ghosts
Of forgotten
Times
I expect this memory
And hold on
Tight
A cauldron bubbles over
Deep inside this
Pit
And red it races swiftly
Until I go off as
Planned

Reviews

[Cassie]

Venting is good, it helps to get give us peace sort of. I like Tight
A cauldron bubbles over , i relate too much.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Venting definitely helps me. If I didn't vent id eventually erupt and that just wouldn't be good lol

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed reading your poem.."A cauldron bubbles over
Deep inside this Pit." Unstable deep emotions bubbling over.. needs release for a short time. An expected memory.. Good job. Keep writing.

[LapseOfMind]

Awesome, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes, sometimes you just need to let it out, otherwise you might explode

[Philip Muls]

Venting what I must...I like the tagline ...like a fair warning. The first 3 lines are like a contract text, very well done.

I am curious to find out what a cauldron is and whether it bubbles over.

[LapseOfMind]

I'm glad you liked it. A cauldron is a big pot often times shown as what a witch makes her brew in. And yes it can definitely bubble over if the fire is too hot for too long

[Philip Muls]

Great! Love it.

[Everheal]

I have no idea what this poem is taking about but that's the beauty of poetry isn't it? Authorial-intent vs. Reader-response! I see dark things in this short poem and I like it. Well done Lapsofmind

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you much, it felt good to write it. and yes, dark things reside in there lol