Notebooks

A Poem by LapseOfMind

I found some really old notebooks of mine and this flowed out.

The past never leaves
It only drips from your skin
Claiming space in your eyes
It's choice is to live
This gravity lifts me
And reflects what once was
Fingers bent on the broken
Life with never enough
And yet I'm in the distance
This vision fading from sight
Reminded memories whisper
As I'm pushed forward in time

© 2015 LapseOfMind

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zunie frost

i really love the last line ....... the way this poem end is really great ... thanks for sharing this lovely work ....

Posted 9 Years Ago

Coyote Poetry

Memories, can be good or bad? I believe okay to keep old notebooks. Reminders that once you were young and foolish once. I agree, we must go forward. We on built upon life struggles and victories. Make us wiser and smarter if we are lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and leaving a review

9 Years Ago

My pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.

J3ssInJupit3r

I do not know how familiar you are with The Beatles, if you know them at all, but this poem had the feel of the song "Across the Universe".
"Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup" that is just a part of the song. But the way the poem flows and just blends in with itself as if a string of thoughts on a pretty necklace of your soul.
I really liked this poem. I liked how it flowed and how it reminded me of my favorite band. Thank you for sharing. Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

The Beatles are an excellent band! I'm humbled that, even in the most slightest of ways, you would c.. read more

Celie Rose

I really like the way you describe the past."he past never leaves
It only drips from your skin" Reminded memories whisper
As I'm pushed forward in time" Constant reminder do whispers, but time does go on. You are a deep writer. Good theme. I like that. Well written