These Scars
A Poem by
LapseOfMind
A poem about scars. Contest Entry for the 10 word poem contest.
Please just
Touch these eyes
To remind
Me
This scar
© 2015 LapseOfMind
Reviews
concise, but those memories are seen by the eyes inside...the scars seen most are in there.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yeah, most scars are inside. That's why I write most often, to them heal...and to remember .
Good ten word poem. The short ones are very difficult.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Good ten word poem. The short ones are very difficult.
9 Years Ago
Yes they are lol thank you much
9 Years Ago
You have great talent and I like your style.
9 Years Ago
Thank you :) it's all of you writers out there that inspire me. I took a year off writing completely.. read more Thank you :) it's all of you writers out there that inspire me. I took a year off writing completely and only started again yesterday
A lot said in so few words. Scars are the honored gifts of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
A lot said in so few words. Scars are the honored gifts of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much
9 Years Ago
You are welcome.
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Added on August 30, 2015
Last Updated on August 30, 2015
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LapseOfMind Seattle, WA
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